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Let's see if we can make it more lively.
Move different words into the sentence
to make it more interesting.
Try out all the words!
That's much better!
Compare the boring old sentence to your
lively new one.
on the drenched planet.
Here is another sentence.
Try out different words to make
it more interesting.
What an amazing change!
Look how the words you added improve
the sentence.
pathetically in the magnificent
bowl.
Can you use these sentences to make a story that begins with the rocket and ends with the astronaut?
Write the middle of your story in the space below.
Your sentences are much more
imaginative!
The icy rocket landed irritably on the drenched planet. utut The grubby fish swam clumsily in the shiny bowl.
Good work! See how using descriptive words can make your writing come to life?
Now you can Try more activities about powerful words.
Select Change to replace a word in your
sentence. When you're happy with the
sentence, select Done.