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an interesting
Let's make a boring sentence.
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The boy walked on the beach.
Yawn! This sentence is definitely dull.
Let's see if we can make it more lively.
Let's see if we can make it more lively.
Move different words into the sentence
to make it more interesting.
Try out all the words!
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The boy walked on the
beach.
The boy walked
on the
beach.
That's much better!
Compare the boring old sentence to your
lively new one.
The boy walked on the beach.
The splotchy boy walked
sadly on the rough beach.
sadly on the rough beach.
Here is another sentence.
Try out different words to make
it more interesting.
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The girl built a
sandcastle.
The thoughtfully girl
built a
thoughtfully sandcastle.
What an amazing change!
Look how the words you added improve
the sentence.
The girl built a sandcastle.
The splotchy boy walked
sadly on the rough beach.
sadly on the rough beach.
Can you use these sentences to make a story
that begins with the boy and ends with the girl?
Write the middle of your story in the space
below.
The mechanical boy walked confidently on the rough beach.
The dripping girl thoughtfully built an artistic sandcastle.
Wow! Compare your new story to
the sentences below.
Your version is much more
imaginative!
the sentences below.
Your version is much more
imaginative!
The boy walked on
the beach.
the beach.
The girl built a sandcastle.
The girl built a sandcastle.
Good work! See how using descriptive words
can make your writing come to life?
Now you can Try more activities about
powerful words.
can make your writing come to life?
Now you can Try more activities about
powerful words.
The splotchy boy walked sadly
on the rough beach. The
artistic girl thoughtfully built a
dripping sandcastle.
Select Change to replace a word in your
sentence. When you're happy with the
sentence, select Done.
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The boy walked
on the
beach.