Let's see if we can make it more lively.
Move different words into the sentence
to make it more interesting.
Try out all the words!
That's much better!
Compare the boring old sentence to your
lively new one.
the drenched mat.
Here is another sentence.
Try out different words to make
it more interesting.
What an amazing change!
Look how the words you added improve
the sentence.
pathetically in the magnificent
bowl.
Can you use these sentences to make a story
that begins with the cat and ends with the fish?
Write the middle of your story in the
space below.
the sentences below.
Your version is much more
imaginative!
The fancy cat sat irritably on the drenched mat. utut The grubby fish swam clumsily in the shiny bowl.
can make your writing come to life?
Now you can Try more activities about
powerful words.
The splotchy boy walked sadly
on the rough beach. The
artistic girl thoughtfully built a
dripping sandcastle.
Write a sentence that says what happened.
It could look like:
The police officer found the treasure in the mansion.
or
'Where's the treasure map?' asked the police officer.
Then, look for good words that:
- describe the police officer, the treasure or the mansion
- show how the police officer was acting.
Select Change to replace a word in your
sentence. When you're happy with the
sentence, select Done.
Select Change to replace a word in your
sentence. When you're happy with the
sentence, select Done.